In his famous quote, Benjamin Franklin analyzes the issue of liberty vs. security; he depicts that an individual cannot have both. Franklin argues that one who accepts security over liberty deserves neither. Though his words are important, they are not relevant to today's society.
Though Benjamin Franklin’s quote may have been true in 1759, his quote is no longer pertinent to the year 2014. Technology has posed a greater threat to our lives, and our security. In addition to having to worry about things like starvation or financial difficulties, people now have much larger problems occupying their minds. Since the events of September 11, 2001, United States citizens have become more aware of the hazards we face today, and will continue to face for an eternity. Atomic bombs, school shootings, and major tragedies are sweeping the nation, and they are beginning to pose more of a threat to the security of the United States than our forefather could have imagined. Additionally, Benjamin Franklin did not allow for compromise; he argues that an individual my only have one or the other: liberty or security. Why can’t we have both? The invasion of privacy at airport security is a small price to pay for the safety and well being of everyone traveling; but, the recent events regarding the National Security Agency is a little bit too far. People should feel safe, but not overly invaded. Is there no happy medium? Is it too much to ask for the well being of innocent people, as well as rights? It is interesting to think about. Benjamin Franklin’s quote may have been relevant to his time in 1759, but in 2014, there is a way and a need to have both liberty and security.
"They that can give up essential liberty to obtain a little temporary safety deserve neither liberty, nor safety."
Benjamin Franklin, 1759
Claire- good summary, except for the last sentence of your summary- that is an opinion statement "Though his words are important, they are not relevant to today's society. "
ReplyDeleteWith your response, make sure to add a why to your response topic sentence. I really like your points that you have put into support your statement, but push yourself in your writing by going beyond and finding quotations to support your thinking. Becareful of asking questions without providing answers to support your position. Finally, make sure to eliminate all personal words.
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